forget me not
when I am gone
forget me
when I can no longer make you smile
when you hear the sound of my voice
and you can't think of anything to say
forget me not
when I am dead
forget me
when I can no longer make you feel safe
when I say I care
and all you hear is I hate
forget me not
when I am away
forget me
when you can no longer see me in your future
when you envision one without me
and it is a much nicer place
forget me not
when I am but a soul
forget me
when the thought of losing me fully
makes you smile
and no tears start to fall
if that should happen
then please
forget not to forget me.
you wrote the poem? It is very nice. I also write my own poems and it can be found on my blog.
ReplyDeleteDr. Wends of www.journeysandtravels.com
wow! this is a very nice poem. Forget me not ms kay! :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem... a plea for an everlasting love and care. A true reflection one's innermost feeling of belongingness and eternal desire of love forever.
ReplyDeletePlease check what's the latest in my post: RandomThoughts!
nice poem . light but with meaning .
ReplyDeletei also do write poems :)
try checking mine if theres a time !!
i love poems too but i can't compose a good one. forget not to forget me, i always say that to my hubby
ReplyDeleteGaling ha in fairness! Nakakatuwa! Lolz.
ReplyDeleteOo nga maganda ang pagkasulat promise :)
Read my Poem: Flair Connection
like it!
ReplyDeleteim not good on making poems, dinaya ko lng ung mga projects ko sa school...
i will forget you not for your creativity in a mixed free verse and rhythmic poem
ReplyDeletei always admire people who can write limited chosen words yet very meaningful and powerful
Love it! Very sensible poem, I must say. :) This is, by far, one of the best poems I've read in blogs recently.
ReplyDeletenicely written :), the title reminded me of the flower -forget me not
ReplyDeleteThis is nice! I don't know why but it reminds me of Neruda. haha
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! cheers to more sweet notes from the heart! <3
ReplyDeletegood stuff you've got there!
ReplyDeleteit has been ages since i've written a poem + i really miss it..back then I can only write one when i am sad + lonely, weird, right? ^_^
I don't think anyone can ever forget you, Kay. :) You're pretty hard to shake off even if you don't mean to leave an imprint. :) I love that you're writing more!
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