not even in your dreams ... on June 12, 2010 Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Like moth to a flame Like bees to honey You all come running after me But you will never catch me Not even in your dreams. Everything Arts Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Edmar GuquibJanuary 13, 2012 at 11:30 PMwhat can I say? a powerful short poemReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGil CamporazoJanuary 13, 2012 at 11:32 PMIt seems that you're trying to compose a poem which is popularly known as limerick. A limerick is a form of comic verse consisting of five anapaestic lines of which the first, second, and fifth have three metrical feet and rhyme together and the third and fourth have two metrical feet and rhyme together. But your poem doesn't conform with this mechanics.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyyuukiJanuary 14, 2012 at 12:33 AMall i can say is...ang haba ng hair!nice poem...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyClintJanuary 14, 2012 at 12:58 AMNice try. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousJanuary 14, 2012 at 2:02 AMThat is so deep. And very nice poem. I like it! The connection and rhyming is good.Just wrote short poem for you.Touch me not; But leave me not;You love me and I need you.What would be like to live without you? -I hope you like it. -Jenny O'TooleReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLady PatchyJanuary 14, 2012 at 2:33 AMahahah.I like the poem,very well said.Come and get or catch me if you can.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplykikoJanuary 14, 2012 at 6:24 AMThe most challenging partis to catch you from the startbut I will try my luckthe moment your eyes sparkReplyDeleteRepliesReplyIon GonzagaJanuary 14, 2012 at 6:49 AMastig! how a few select words could be more powerful than just simply saying, 'you will never catch me.' you are really artsy kathy.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBlair VillanuevaJanuary 14, 2012 at 10:41 AMnice short poem.. it's like HaikuReplyDeleteRepliesReplyjuanderfulpinoyJanuary 14, 2012 at 12:05 PMAnd lalim , may bumabagabag ba sa iyo.. Chill ka lang . =)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyShirgie ScfJanuary 14, 2012 at 3:05 PMshort but meaningful. sometimes, a poem doesn't need too much words to really express your thoughts and your feelings...nice one.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyralphJanuary 14, 2012 at 3:47 PMi have a question? bakit, parang "catch me if you can?" LOL. Yahweh blessReplyDeleteRepliesReplySan Pablo CityJanuary 14, 2012 at 3:54 PMBees always get their honey, right? As far as I know, bees make honey so they'll always catch it. He he heReplyDeleteRepliesReplyjulieJanuary 14, 2012 at 6:28 PMWow andami ata nila Kath ha.. hahaha! well good luck na lang sa kanila. hehehe.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplysioneeJanuary 14, 2012 at 6:34 PMjust a short poem but the words seem to be screaming with might and confidence within. I love it! :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJCJanuary 15, 2012 at 1:30 AMhahaha i like this poem. "catch me if you can"ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyChaJanuary 15, 2012 at 2:30 AMO ha! Catch me if you can ba ito? Hayaan mo silang maghabol mabilis ka naman atang tumakbo ha ha ha!!Run Forrest Run! este Run Kay Run! http://travel-on-a-shoe-string.blogspot.com/2012/01/choco-late-de-batirol.htmlReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJhenJanuary 15, 2012 at 5:42 AMHands down (with my two thumbs up)! Simple yet Astig! :)I'm taking this poem as God's answer to something I prayed just earlier this morning...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyrjs mamaJanuary 17, 2012 at 7:50 PMlovely poem :) more please...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Hi! Let's all try to add more positivity in this world and adhere to the saying, "if you don't have anything nice to say, keep silent." Showering you with unicorn poop so you'd always stay magical! Heart heart!